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	<title>Comments for Lesbian Writer, Rosalyn Wraight</title>
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	<description>author of lesbian mystery and the lesbian adventure club series</description>
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		<title>Comment on Preview of My Third Lesbian Mystery by Roz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Roz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 May 2009 15:36:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m glad you liked &lt;em&gt;Woman Justice,&lt;/em&gt; and I &lt;i&gt;will&lt;/i&gt; take &quot;convoluted&quot; as a compliment. The idea of you being seduced and sideswiped right along with Emily is very interesting, as is &quot;[wanting] her to go off the deep end.&quot;

The LAC books will give you more Holly and Laura but in a much different way.

I appreciate your taking the time to share your thoughts—and for reading my stuff to begin with. Take care.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad you liked <em>Woman Justice,</em> and I <i>will</i> take &#8220;convoluted&#8221; as a compliment. The idea of you being seduced and sideswiped right along with Emily is very interesting, as is &#8220;[wanting] her to go off the deep end.&#8221;</p>
<p>The LAC books will give you more Holly and Laura but in a much different way.</p>
<p>I appreciate your taking the time to share your thoughts—and for reading my stuff to begin with. Take care.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Preview of My Third Lesbian Mystery by Maria</title>
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		<dc:creator>Maria</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 May 2009 02:10:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Okay, you got me with the sample. I would have been more than happy to keep reading.

I finished Secrets &amp; Sins a few days ago, and even though I liked it, Woman Justice is still my favorite. (I like Laura more in the second, though. Holly, too.) There was something about that book that got me. The first time I got to the end, I simply did a big WHOA, and tried to figure out all the things I missed. The second time I read it, I saw better what you did. Or maybe more what I did to myself. I watched Millicent seduce Emily, but I think I&#039;m the one who got seduced. I shouldn&#039;t have wanted her to go off the deep end, but I did. Like being so relieved when Millicent showed up at the door after Emily freaked out that I didn&#039;t even pay attention to the guy at the door.

Or the ring! If you read mysteries you should know enough to keep everything that&#039;s in the first chapter foremost in your mind until the very end. But I didn&#039;t. I got side swiped like Emily got side swiped.

The third time I read it, I read all three story lines separate. The investigation. Then the Emily Millicent stuff. Then the stories. Things are easier to see that way but it doesn&#039;t make for the same wild ride. I think it is one of the most convoluted stories I&#039;ve ever read, and I really mean that as a compliment. Even on the second read, when I knew the ending, I still liked it. I liked it (alot, can you tell?), I liked the second one, and I&#039;m figuring I&#039;ll like the new one. Keep writing, please. :) I will try the adventure clubs books until then.

Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, you got me with the sample. I would have been more than happy to keep reading.</p>
<p>I finished Secrets &amp; Sins a few days ago, and even though I liked it, Woman Justice is still my favorite. (I like Laura more in the second, though. Holly, too.) There was something about that book that got me. The first time I got to the end, I simply did a big WHOA, and tried to figure out all the things I missed. The second time I read it, I saw better what you did. Or maybe more what I did to myself. I watched Millicent seduce Emily, but I think I&#8217;m the one who got seduced. I shouldn&#8217;t have wanted her to go off the deep end, but I did. Like being so relieved when Millicent showed up at the door after Emily freaked out that I didn&#8217;t even pay attention to the guy at the door.</p>
<p>Or the ring! If you read mysteries you should know enough to keep everything that&#8217;s in the first chapter foremost in your mind until the very end. But I didn&#8217;t. I got side swiped like Emily got side swiped.</p>
<p>The third time I read it, I read all three story lines separate. The investigation. Then the Emily Millicent stuff. Then the stories. Things are easier to see that way but it doesn&#8217;t make for the same wild ride. I think it is one of the most convoluted stories I&#8217;ve ever read, and I really mean that as a compliment. Even on the second read, when I knew the ending, I still liked it. I liked it (alot, can you tell?), I liked the second one, and I&#8217;m figuring I&#8217;ll like the new one. Keep writing, please. <img src='http://lesbianwriter.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I will try the adventure clubs books until then.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Lesbian Adventure Club Book 8 Released by Roz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Roz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 16 Apr 2009 00:10:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s funny, Jamie. I admit I&#039;ve prodded her along a few times. She is a tough mountain to move.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s funny, Jamie. I admit I&#8217;ve prodded her along a few times. She is a tough mountain to move.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Lesbian Adventure Club Book 8 Released by Jamie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jamie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Apr 2009 21:09:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for answering. She is good at keeping secrets. I think half the fun of the books is trying to figure things out that she won&#039;t admit or doesn&#039;t even see. Especially in Scraps I spent more time yelling at her than I did paying attention to things.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for answering. She is good at keeping secrets. I think half the fun of the books is trying to figure things out that she won&#8217;t admit or doesn&#8217;t even see. Especially in Scraps I spent more time yelling at her than I did paying attention to things.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Lesbian Adventure Club Book 8 Released by Roz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Roz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Apr 2009 02:40:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I swear: It&#039;s okay to ask! And as long as &lt;em&gt;I&#039;m&lt;/em&gt; not spoiling anything, I&#039;ll do my best to answer.

To be honest, when I wrote &lt;em&gt;Scavengers,&lt;/em&gt; I did not know I was beginning a series. It was actually in the hands of my publisher when I realized I liked the group of them enough to want to find out what happens next. They held off on publishing while I wrote &lt;em&gt;Ledge Walkers,&lt;/em&gt; simply a sequel, still not a series. &lt;em&gt;Savages&lt;/em&gt; finally cemented it in my head that I was writing a series. That being said... I had rather elaborate character sketches/histories of them all for &lt;em&gt;Scavengers,&lt;/em&gt; because I had to make sure each of the ten was distinct. So, a lot of what unravels I knew from the beginning. Some of it, though, I learn about them as I go.

Yes, there was a big piece of Kate in Book 8, and, yes, I knew that from the beginning. I don&#039;t think you missed anything, though. The military father reference was in &lt;em&gt;Scavengers,&lt;/em&gt; but there weren&#039;t clues to big piece that I planted along the way. Kate referred to it as a sore that only bleeds around Christmas time, which is why it came up in the last book, as it should have. She also said it was a &quot;secret a few of them kept,&quot; and she is rather trustworthy with secrets, including her own. You didn&#039;t miss anything; she kept her own secret. The effects of it were there all along, but certainly not clues to what it actually was.

The Nerd and the Cheerleader... I&#039;ve wondered about that story myself, and this new piece of info does put a heftier spin on it. At this point, I honestly don&#039;t know if/when it will come up, but I do know it&#039;s there. And now I know you&#039;re curiosity is there, as well.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I swear: It&#8217;s okay to ask! And as long as <em>I&#8217;m</em> not spoiling anything, I&#8217;ll do my best to answer.</p>
<p>To be honest, when I wrote <em>Scavengers,</em> I did not know I was beginning a series. It was actually in the hands of my publisher when I realized I liked the group of them enough to want to find out what happens next. They held off on publishing while I wrote <em>Ledge Walkers,</em> simply a sequel, still not a series. <em>Savages</em> finally cemented it in my head that I was writing a series. That being said&#8230; I had rather elaborate character sketches/histories of them all for <em>Scavengers,</em> because I had to make sure each of the ten was distinct. So, a lot of what unravels I knew from the beginning. Some of it, though, I learn about them as I go.</p>
<p>Yes, there was a big piece of Kate in Book 8, and, yes, I knew that from the beginning. I don&#8217;t think you missed anything, though. The military father reference was in <em>Scavengers,</em> but there weren&#8217;t clues to big piece that I planted along the way. Kate referred to it as a sore that only bleeds around Christmas time, which is why it came up in the last book, as it should have. She also said it was a &#8220;secret a few of them kept,&#8221; and she is rather trustworthy with secrets, including her own. You didn&#8217;t miss anything; she kept her own secret. The effects of it were there all along, but certainly not clues to what it actually was.</p>
<p>The Nerd and the Cheerleader&#8230; I&#8217;ve wondered about that story myself, and this new piece of info does put a heftier spin on it. At this point, I honestly don&#8217;t know if/when it will come up, but I do know it&#8217;s there. And now I know you&#8217;re curiosity is there, as well.</p>
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